花恋篽謹

這是英文加分作文…我懶得改成批改過的…

Dear principal,

My name is Stanley. I’m a second-grade student. I want to make some suggestions that making our school to be more better.

First, I think our school’s back door should open more early because some students are going to school soon. They sometimes have to walk to front door.

By the way, there are many cram school put their DM in our classroom. I think we should arrest they doing these things. But why they can get into school? Isn’t anybody seeing them? Every time I walk in classroom, the things come front me is many kinds of cram school’s DM.

Second, our lunch is usually the same type. If we sometimes change the type of lunch. I thing it will be more students buy their lunch in the school without ordering lunch outside. In other way, we have worked out a systematical way to let us buy lunch more convenient and quickly. Many student think the food in our school isn’t very good to eat, so am I.

Third, I thing our school is too small. But students in our school is more than I can think. If we have more large place to use, I’ll very happy. So I’m expecting the building which we are building. It must be very useful to us.

These are all my suggestions. Whether you suggest or not, I'm glad that you spent time reading this letter.